The bold blue title looks really nice overlapping the image. It lets the text stand out ever more than usual, which I think is important for an Indie magazine. Although, if I was to change one thing, it would be to make the rest of the text bigger to fill the page more.
My mother heard of Scarletts coronation now she told me " your 20 tomorrow! Its time for your coronation! Your time to be queen! Birthday party tomorrow , coronation the next day and then she says also we have some young men here you need to choose which one to marry! So birthday, coronation, wedding! I can't do that! Help!- Rose