"Does she?" "Yep, I saw her the other day getting coffee." "You know she can't see you though," I sigh knowing that he's right. "What if I could make her see me, see that I'm alright." Rhett turns his lips, "We're supposed to be invisible, not spying on the girls that we once loved." I raised me eyebrows, "Come on..."
The Importance of Varying Sentence Length. We're supposed to understand how to control the pacing of a story and why that's important, but pacing also exists in the flow of the sentences, the structure of each paragraph. Not just in the way the tale unfolds. A story requires as much rhythm, beat, and flow as a song.
It never made sense. The words I was told when she was found. They didn't fit together, like pieces of two different puzzles. I looked at my feet when they told me my wife committed suicide. I was only a man of twenty, and she left me with our newborn daughter. Death. What is it? I wondered through her whole funeral about the meaning. I am a Christian man, with a good mind for things, and normally has an answer to everything. But this time, her death rendered me speechless.
Illustrated Six-Word Memoirs by Students from Grade School to Grad School