Seems like a cute book to help teach about starting a new paragraph when the setting in your story changes and using transition words (I like her idea of having them use a fist pump when reading their paragraphs aloud to show a new paragraph--clever)
Cute idea for bridal shower game or have at the reception for people to fill out--Mad Lib. A coworker had these at her reception and it was fun to fill out and hear how it all sounded in the end! It is definitely entertaining!!